big changes in lights to darks from pitch black to white, you
can really make the mood and feel of the drawing come out rather
than having the entire drawing stay within a certain set of gray
tones. To some of you this sort of thing may seem obvious, but
more often than not, beginning artists make the mistake not learning
it at all. Again, I need to stress that there are times when stylistically
your drawing doesnt use line quality, but a vast majority
of traditional sketching does.
of this section is for two reasons. First, artists can get exposure
of their work, and second they can get some non-bias feedback
from me. Today Im going to do a critique on some pieces
sent in by Gamaiel Zavala ([email protected]).
sent in some very nice work. Keep in mind that Gamaiel has substantial
quality in his drawing and you dont need to have professional
quality artwork to submit to this column. This critique section
is designed for every one of all levels.
piece that we will take a look at is a portrait he did.
how nicely he used his lights and darks in the shading of this
drawing. This is a perfect example of using line quality successfully.
Much of the right side of the face is pure white which shows off
a nice use of realistic-looking lighting. This is a great example
of how every little bit of the face doesnt need to be colored
in to show texture. Some can be just white. Conversely, some can
be just black (if there are heavy shadows or darkness in the particular
picture you are working on).
nice proportions of the face set up. The eyes, nose, and mouth
look like they are just where they are suppose to be. The facial
expression is very natural looking (which can be very difficult
to pull off). Many times when drawing the human face, the expression
will look weird because the features arent placed properly.
In Gamaiels drawing here, he did it nicely.
just one of his drawings, and you can see more of Gamaiels
work at: www.geocities.com/siliconvalley/way/8354/
up this addition of Painting On Polygons. Keep sending in your
questions and graphics for the Critique and Q&A section, and
keep drawing too!
Rick "Flatness" Grossenbacher works on Gameboy Color
games for Vicarious Visions.